In the last few week i have write a lot in my writer notebook and i think im going to keep on writing the story about im skateboarding i think it wont be really interested for people who dont skate. but there will be some part that they will find it funny like the security trace me with the baton.
why is my story is a good story ? well because skateboarding don't really popular in Vietnam so in the school will have a little people know about it so when they hear about the trick in skateboarding i think they will be interested my story about the skateboard trick, even you can do a skateboard trick down a gap or a set of stairs.
For the last one how can i make my story better ? i think im going to put more dialouges, more figurative language like similies, metaphor, repatition and alliteration, so the story will sound much better and more interesting for the reader to read, and i will put more thesis statement in my story like opinion but i wont make it too wordy, too general so it will go better
Why not tell me the story about the security chasing you? You can tell us about your friends, the tricks you do and the conflict you had with security? Don't forget your thesis statement?
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