Blog Assignment # 3: Reflection on Peer Review

the advice that i think is the most helpful for me in my personal narrative is i write it really confusing for others to read, and i have to make it more interested for others to read because i write like skate and go eat something but in a different way so is kind of confusing, and make it more interested because when others read they will like it. from read other students's personal narrative i learn that people make it really interested by putting sentence about the moment that someone really lucky to have or maybe tell that they can do it but you cannot because you have to ptactice....

 

i will try to write more about my personal narrative, add more detail, dialog. my personal narrative not really interesting but next time i will think of more interest ideas because i did not write a lot and it all about skateboarding stuff. the grammar mistake that i have make is the past i forgot to change it so it kind of bad.